Wednesday, 1 June 2016

My Short Story.

  • WALT use all basic punctuation independently and attempt more complex punctuation (eg semicolons, colons, parentheses) (Year 7/8)

                  Short Story

Woosh! Jr was woken up by the waves against the sand and rocks .Jamieson the dog barked and woke Kaya the pig up at the same time, they all got up and went for a walk across the beach.Then they discovered that the waves were getting really close to the house, and went closer immediately they got wet and sprinted back to the house.They packed as much as they could like dog food, pig food, normal food and clothes.Then they set off to find a new house, but then they remembered that they needed money so he went looking for a job in the city.The next day he got up from the street, and went looking .Finally, after two hours of looking he found a job at Mc donalds standing at the register.2 days later he has enough money from saving and his job.He went looking for a house.He came across a nice looking house, he only had 200,000 dollars to spend the house he was looking at was 180,000 dollars he looked around and bought the house.He spent 20,000 on furniture and food, now Jr is 18 and his new house is holding up well for him.

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